[BJWilliams]

Ive been writing off and on since my sophomore year of high school and I have been looking for some constructive criticism on my latest batch of short stories. I have three written right now and a fourth in process. I started writing these early last year. They are a combination science fiction historical action stories involving myself and friends of mine from the marching band. Id love to send them to anybody that would be interested in some well mannered criticism of my stories before I attempt to submit them for publication in some medium or another.

[BJWilliams]

Here is the basic synopsis of how the series works:

The band is en route to Allentown PA for a performance (as we are this year), and while at a rest stop, a freak anomaly in teh space time continuum opens up and swallows everyone (miraculously except the instructors), and everyone is scattered across history into various eras ranging from the American Revolution to the 1960s. The goal is simple...return to the present.

[Sly Fox]

OK, I'll bite.

Send me the first one to slyfox@flamefans.com

[BJWilliams]

YGM Sly

[BJWilliams]

So I found a writers forum for positng my stories, www.writersclub.net

If any more of you guys want to check em out and offer some constructive criticism youre welcome to.